John V - Salt Lake City, Utah

"This presenter needs a proofreader. Having a typo in the title ("Clinician's" rather than "Clinicians") gives a bad first impression. There are many incorrect word choices (e.g., "lose" instead of "loss," "your" instead of "you're," and so on. There were two run-on sentences and one unseparated independent clause, all creating confusion in meaning. Many complex slides were too small to read on a computer screen during this Zoom webinar. Some complex slides were shown too briefly"